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Wednesday, 20 August 2014

An otter is the greatest pet on earth to have!!! By Sophia

I think that an otter would be an amazing pet to have because they are so cute and do lots of awesome tricks! Just see if you want an otter as a pet after my three excellent reasons

You know how otters can do pretty cool tricks just like humans.So if you have a swimming pool and you don't use it very often,otter will love it ,it would be a dream come true!An otter would be a very good entertainer for family who are visiting.You might even become famous or rich if people give you money for your otters cool tricks.If your otter is good at its tricks,it might even make it into a circus!If your otter becomes so famous,it might even be on TV shows or even on the news!

Otters are very cute indeed,so that means that they will be cute no matter what.Your otter may be so cute that it will make other owners jealous.Your otter may be so adorable that it might win a prize for...the worlds most cutest animal.Otters are not much different to normal pets so you would treat it exactly the same.Otters are one of the only pets who do amazing tricks in the water,so it would be good to have a pet who is different to all the other pets.

Otters give you company when you are lonely or cant sleep at night.It is very nice to have a pet that will not hurt you or hurt anybody else,so that means that if you get a otter it will not be dangerous.Because otters are very small it will cost less money to pay for food or clothes.Otters are very friendly so that you will always have your pet as a friend.If you lose your soft toy and you cant find it ,you can use your otter!

So pleeeeeease can i have an otter as a pet,i've told you my three reasons you just have to believe me! By Sophia


9 comments:

  1. You have presented a persuasive argument Sophia. I am not sure if your mum will go along with it though.

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  2. It is sooooooooo long!

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  3. WOW!!! Great work!

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  4. I love your story!SD

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  5. Your story is wonderful! RG

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  6. I now want an otter!TF

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  7. cool story sophia! GS

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  8. I enjoyed reading her story!CB

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  9. Although i really enjoyed your writing Sophia there is NO WAY you can have an Otter as a pet! Good try though but mate your dreaming! lol xx

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